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Great trance track mate. You've got a really good feel for progression and structure and the chord progressions sound epic as anything!
The kick has that good solid 'thwop' to it, so I can't really see why people wouldn't approve of it..I mean, its melodic trance right? You don't want to drown the track. Very nice harmonizations with the pads, great energy with the hats. One thing I think would take it up to a new level would be a bit more detail at the transitions. i reckon some more involved snare rolls would really rock.
I was thinking the offbeat wanted more punch, and you brought that clap in just in time, nice one!
Well, I think you've made Darren Tate proud, keep it up dude !