Bass in the place!
This is pretty good since I'm guessing you're a newcomer to techno. That pitched kick drum loop is pretty catchy, the problem is there's no really strong driving beat. You need a big mother of a kick playing every quarter note. 4 per bar. That will give your techno the foundation is needs.
Catchy bassline here as well, but it needs the techno kick drum loop to make it groove right.
One more thing, the hi-hats you have are too loud, they're the loudest thing in the mix when they should be among the most quiet :)
Keep it up, I look forward to seeing your future work.